3/23: 465 words. My writing tends to be heavy on dialogue, reading almost like a move script at times. But the two chapters that I’ve been writing over the last week have found the point-of-view characters either entirely alone or alone for significant chunks of time. This has necessarily led to much more narrative writing and description. It’s been a good exercise, and I think I’ve kept things moving well. But it has simultaneously kept up the trend of my remaining somewhat uncomfortable (for various reasons) with this quarter of the book.