5/2: 826 words. The chapter I’m writing now is foreshadowing some bad stuff that is going to befall the characters. There seems to be a fine line to draw here. I don’t want to be too overt about it, but when the bad thing happens later, I want the reader to say, “Oh, I should have seen that coming.” Surprising but inevitable. It will probable take a few rounds of edits to get that exactly right.
